new poem

[honeyk]

i watch you watching me

your eyes, they run along my thighs
up and down, back and forth
run 'em south and drag 'em north
lick your lips and let them linger
as i wrap you round my finger

I hide behind an open door
undressing, knowing you want more
slowly taking off my clothes
you can't see, but it's a show
and i know you know i know

-this one is a REALLY ROUGH DRAFT...so i will keep working on it, but as you can see, i really need some suggestions for an effective way to present this idea....thanks a lot!




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[Soiled Soul]

I really dug this one how it is. Being aguy its cool to see this from the other side but its also harder to add suggestions.

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[Hannibal]

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What he said.

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As miserable as life may be I hold it pretty precious...

If I lose the light of the sun, I will write by candlelight, moonlight, no light. If I lose paper and ink, I wil write in blood on forgotten walls. I will write always, I will capture nights all over the world and bring them to you.
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